Vertical (song)

[Underground_Network]

Here we go, vertical
Here we go, vertical
Vertical horizon
Vertically on fire.

Stand above
All the rest
Feel the pounding
In your chest.

Heartbeat
Run away
Stone cold
Synergy.

Isolate,
Decimate
Integrate
Dissipate.

Stone cold
Sanity
Heartbeat
Calamity.

Here we go, vertical
Here we go, vertical
Vertical horizon
The sky is on fire.

Ostracize
Remediate
Classify
Make indistinct.

Here we go, vertical
Standing on
Inverted ground
Here we go, vertical, vertical, vertical.

This is why
I deny
All the lies
Seen by my eyes.

Vertical horizon
Vertically on fire
Vertical horizon
Vertically on fire

Put it out
Wash away
The cleanliness
Of sanity.

The sky is on fire
Vertical horizon
Let's go vertical
Let's go vertical.

Moving up
In the world
This is where
I stop and go.

Infiltrate
Obliterate
Manipulate
The city-state.

Here we go, vertical
Here we go, vertical
Endless is the
Vertical, inside the vertical.

Vertical horizon
Vertical horizon
Vertical horizon
Vertical horizon.

Sunshine melancholy
Systematic sympathy,
Let's invert it
Make ourselves be wannabes.

Vertical insanity
Vertical humanity
Vertical distinction
Vertical inversion.

Here we go, vertical
Here we go, vertical
Here we go, vertical
Here...we...go...VERTICAL!!! (vertical, vertical, vertical, vertical)

[Kaleidoscope Eyes]

Dude, I always love your work. I would love to hear any of your songs put to music, or even just a clip of a basic melody to go with it, I'd love to see what you'd come up with.

As far as this one goes, I really like it. I love the flow, I love the subtle rime scheme ((although I don't know why it's spelled 'rime'; all of my English teachers have insisted that's how you spell it o_0)), and the use of words you don't often hear every day. I picture this as having a sort of electronic feel to it. It kind of makes me think of Infected Mushroom somehow, when I think of how the music might sound. I'm not sure what you had in mind, but that's what I hear.

Very nice. :)

[Underground_Network]

^^ Yeah, I intended for it to have an "electronic-y" sound and I love rhymes (or "rimes"). :D

I really like this song, though I think I could make it shorter or change it a little. I often sing and record some of my songs, but I usually don't put music in the background (mainly because I'm lazy, but also because I can't really make my own music, and finding fitting background music online isn't always easy).