Raped

[Blackness_chic]

I lay there sobbing and shaking,
Hopefully someone is waking,
Do they hear me cry and scream?
Or do they think it's just a dream?
I need someone to hear,
Cuz this guy is to near,
Then he climed into bed,
the fears were running through my head,
As he got on top,
I yelled at him to STOP,
I tried to get away,
He pinned me down and made me stay,
As i felt him force it in,
I knew there was no chance for me to win,
As I felt the pain down there,
I knew from then he didn't care,
He finished what he started,
our bodies then become departed,
For i wished it was only a dream
Because i was only 16.

[diStURbEd]

Great poem and like fallensoul said, you should keep writing!

It is terrible that this has happened to you but don't keep it inside, it will make it worse. Trust me

[Whisper]

Beautiful

~xXx~

[Blackness_chic]

thank you guys. i'm kind of scared now though because i think i might be pregnant. what do i do? :cry:

[redcar]

thank you guys. i'm kind of scared now though because i think i might be pregnant. what do i do? :cry:

omg did that really happen you?

[Blackness_chic]

yes it really happened to me, and no i don't live near a planned parenthood. i'm going to the health care clinic tommorrow though

[redcar]

:hug: omg i am so sorry to hear that happened you, the fucking bastard should be strung up by his genitalia and made bleed to death.

[Blackness_chic]

i feel the same way
i'm only 16. his sister beat the shit out of me tuesday at school. this happened on thanksgiving...

[redcar]

omg no one should ever go through pain like that, i hope they get wats coming to them, a slow death.

[Blackness_chic]

thanks. do you have yahoo messenger or msn?

[Blackness_chic]

i added u to my yahoo. lol . my screen name on msn is [email protected] on yahoo its [email protected]

[xdeviancex]

something undeserved... :? make the best out of that child though
as God said love your enemy .. in that situation id rip his genatalia off put it in his ass and buried alive.. but try to be smart about the situation ..find the heart to pull it off

[Blackness_chic]

i took a pregnancy test at the health care clinic. I'm pregnant. Somebody help me......

[diStURbEd]

I feel extremely bad that this has happened and that you are now pregnant. I just want to ask though, have you reported the horrible man that did this?

[Blackness_chic]

yes i have.

[diStURbEd]

That's great I hope that stupid ass jerk gets what he diserves. Feel free to PM me for some cheerup or to just talk.


- once again keep writing it does not matter where or how but write it down...my favorite is to write it down on a peice of paper cumble it up and throw it away, i dont know why it makes me feel better but it just does -

Have a great day!

[Blackness_chic]

do you have msn or yahoo messenger?

[r0x0row3nd]

sue his fuckin ass and if u cant find him my dad is a detctive he only has his masters though but still hes good he does cases al around the world he went to londan last week and solved som case i donno but he lives in ohio so ohio in use to london....i consider him ...sherlock holmes except we dont live on baker street but he could help u deffenently if u need it.. and i can convince him to do it 4 free i have be4 but msn me and ill give u his work number so u acn kill thoose rat basterds there obominations to human kind mother fuckers i hate dumbasses who do shit like wat happened to u im really really really really really srry cause that happened to my sister :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

[~*DeEpRiVeR*~]

Hey Pm me if u wanna talk...u also might wanna get check for HIV AIDS..

[Blackness_chic]

i know the names of the guys. i dunno how far they're getting on the case though. i mean they have the address of one of the guys but i dunno i haven't heard a word back from them since thanksgiving when i turned it in.

[MasterCujo]

If they arent doing the best job they can, make sure u get better people on the job. U can get then fired and everything if they don't do their best. Also, even if it may be hard, make sure u cooperate w/ the police and everything. This is hard because then may need a full description of the crime, so u have to be ready.

[Blackness_chic]

I've given them a full description of that day and night. everything down to the last detail. they have most of my clothes from that night as well as a rape kit test. now i just have to wait

[*BrokenInside*]

im so sorry to hear that happened to you. no one should ever have to go through that. If ya ever need a girl just to talk to let me know.. I have msn.. I wish you the best of luck with all this

[There_Goes_My_Life]

oh my god... that is so horrible... nobody should ever have to be put through that! I am soo sorry.

About being pregnant... as died.flame said there are many things to consider, and died.flame went through all of the best options perfectly... I hope with whatever you chose you don't have regrets. I wish you the best of luck.

[Chloe.Monette.3]

I lay there sobbing and shaking,
Hopefully someone is waking,
Do they hear me cry and scream?
Or do they think it's just a dream?
I need someone to hear,
Cuz this guy is to near,
Then he climed into bed,
the fears were running through my head,
As he got on top,
I yelled at him to STOP,
I tried to get away,
He pinned me down and made me stay,
As i felt him force it in,
I knew there was no chance for me to win,
As I felt the pain down there,
I knew from then he didn't care,
He finished what he started,
our bodies then become departed,
For i wished it was only a dream
Because i was only 16.

Wow sweetie what a beautiful poem, but it needs some touch ups, are you planning on making it a song?

[Commander Thor]

Wow sweetie what a beautiful poem, but it needs some touch ups, are you planning on making it a song?

This thread is from 2005, try to find something more recent to post in. :)

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