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Anonymous
December 8th, 2005, 09:34 PM
A face behind the galaxy,
A shadow remains hidden.
His gleaming eyes, yet so fierce, drive this world of ours into madness.
He takes in gas and spews out coal.
His fingertips, harden at the sight of eternity..
When he is looking beyond what we can see.
He thinks so deeply, that no one can comprehend.
No one even knows the true he has felt.
When he cries, he cries for our corrupted world.
Yes, there is times when he achieves happiness as well.
He dances among the meteors
and prances from star to star.
It is even more amazing when he falls in love...


No star out of place, every doubt erased, the world is put at rest.

Kiros
December 8th, 2005, 09:40 PM
Wow... that poem is really impressive :)

So, anyone in particular who "he" is representing?

Anonymous
December 9th, 2005, 04:10 PM
Thanks. :oops:

redcar
December 9th, 2005, 04:16 PM
austin as per usual that is totally amazing!!:D:D

diStURbEd
December 11th, 2005, 09:40 PM
Awsome I like how your imagination can make a lot of it