my poem "Downfall"

[alesana1194]

"...as i look over the edge,
i see white all around.
my eyes level with the building tops.
I take one last look around,
one more look at the ground.
I feel the air rush around me,
I scream I don't want to go down.
But its too late, I hit the ground.
As i lay down, straining to see around myself,
the snow turns red.
as my eyes turn to white
my life is over, I'm finally dead."

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I've been feeling depressed lately, so I decided to let myself out on writing poetry.

[Cindex]

The poem is actually pretty good.... But kind of disturbing.

As long as you aren't planning on it :S

[alesana1194]

im not, but it just feels good getting thoughts off my chest.