Poem

[DarkWingedAngel]

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[DarkWingedAngel]

As much as I try to be all strong im not.
I would love for one person to know how I really feel.
My life is shit and I know that.
Everyday when I get up and get changed for school.
I see these scars, I hate them.
But they remind me that for every one of thos scars, I lived another day.
I know im going to crack sooner or later,
I would love for it to be later.
Every day that I see his face, hear his voice on the phone, im happy.
Why did life have to be this way.
I love him and he loves me, we only see each other a few times a year but I still love him.
I don't care that everyone thinks I don't have a lover.
I do have a lover in my life.
He does not know half of what I do, but he loves me anyways.
How I would love to see him everyday.
And hear his voice.
I love you, you better know it.
This is dedicated to the one special person.
love you

[TAC1]

WOW! ah Million stars! This is really good.

[DarkWingedAngel]

thanks
i will post more sometime this week

[Zephyr]

Damn,
You go girl = ]

[DarkWingedAngel]

this right now is the only thing that is stopping me from searching for a blade

oh and BTW the second one i sent to my camp bf




EDIT: i made another last night i will see if i can post it later tonight

[DarkWingedAngel]

I see you every day,
In the halls and in math class.
Everyone thinks you are obnoxious,
I think it is cute and funny.
You constantly bug me,
I don't know if it because you like me or if it is because your like every other guy.
You have short brown hair,
Hazel eyes and your short,
That is my description of a cute guy.
My friends don't like you,
But I don't care what they think,
I like you anyways.
My friends think I like you,
I told them I don't, but I really do.
All I want is for you to like me back.



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comments please:D

[Sunshine Girl]

this just leave me speachless.

*sniffles* its amazing
:)

[DarkWingedAngel]

Okay so I have more now.
I will post them sometime in the next 2 weeks(in really busy)

[Jean Poutine]

I see you every day,
In the halls and in math class.
Everyone thinks you are obnoxious,
I think it is cute and funny.
You constantly bug me,
I don't know if it because you like me//or if it is because your like every other guy.
You have short brown hair,
Hazel eyes and your short,
That is my description of a cute guy.
My friends don't like you,
But I don't care what they think,
I like you anyways.
My friends think I like you,
I told them I don't, but I really do.
All I want is for you to like me back.



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comments please:D
I have just one comment about this one. If I were you I would cut the verse in bold where I put a //. It's too long compared to the rest and ruins the flow, in my opinion.

It's purely stylistic, though.

[DarkWingedAngel]

^ ok
good idea

[DarkWingedAngel]

ok i got some more dunno when i will be able to post em but i will soon

[girlygirl]

wow amazing !!! =]