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RebDoomer
November 24th, 2008, 10:30 PM
A poem I made while I was distracted doing other stuff, but I found time to write this.
I wrote it really fast so I could enter it into this contest.
Like I just said, I wrote it fast so if you think it's bad, I wrote it in a mere 7 minutes.
Uhm, lemme just say on this first poem post, that, I have a poem of mine published in a book already, so I think I know how to write a good poem. ;)

So, here goes... It's called End of Time:


Loving you until the end of time.
I want you so bad and no one can change my mind.
For you I write this special rhyme.
With many hugs and kisses hidden between each line.

Open your loving arms and take me in.
Love is like a game and I really want to win.
Only for the joy and not the pride again.
I would never hurt you because to me, that's a sin.

The end of time seems so far and blind.
Without knowing where we're going, so far behind.
If you want to be with me just give me a sign.
We could be together and be glowing with shine.

A shallow guy would use you and leave you in the trash bin.
I want to reach your heart and find goodness within.
We could go sight seeing in great places like Berlin.
I know we can always get through the thick and thin.



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