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BlackenedSilver
November 18th, 2008, 01:48 PM
Everyone thinkgs they know me
Got me figured out
But you don't see me hiding
When in times of doubt

When I got through bad days
and feel I just wanna die
I go and try to satisfy that feeling
I try, and try, and try.

Everyday that you ignore me
But know theres something wrong
Yet you will never ask me
and wonder when Im gone.

For now you leave me be
and you think you know me well
But inside im going crazy
and will one day send myself to hell.

Zephyr
November 21st, 2008, 02:51 AM
I can relate.
It summarizes my teen years.
Awesome job = ]

BlackenedSilver
November 21st, 2008, 11:47 AM
Thanks Steph. :D Means alot. :D

Underground_Network
November 21st, 2008, 04:40 PM
Leigh, that's an awesome poem. ;)

Seriouslies. :D

BlackenedSilver
November 21st, 2008, 06:24 PM
Thank you!! :D

The Air Guitar Man13
November 22nd, 2008, 12:21 AM
wow!!! thats really good Leigh!!! very thought prevokeing