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nachtspiegel
November 17th, 2008, 02:26 AM
november 17, 2008
I have a few things that I need to confess, but, as always, I do not know how. I see you suffer, and as much as I'd love to keep the evil of the world from hurting you, all of my best and most valiant attemps land me on my face. You wake me from my sleep every night and though I'd love to break these walls down and never leave your side, the real world contains me and I can never find the words I am looking for to express myself. I know that this is a lost cause and the spirit I once held has fled my inner shell and is sleeping somewhere cold. All of my promises fall apart and my best efforts are never enough. I don't know how to fight this, so I have stopped trying to. My inner component of self-destruction leads me to do terrible things and I feel that I would have already bled to death if I did not live to see your smile.
Dear Angel of Mine, though you will never know the way you hold me in the palm of your hands, please know that you always know where to find me and that I will never leave your side.

this is both a release and, i feel, the best writing i have done in ages.

The Batman
November 17th, 2008, 02:33 AM
Wow that was great. That's what I love about poetry it holds so many things inside it.

Random_oso06
November 17th, 2008, 02:56 AM
wow it is great the passion i felt reading this and the certain emotion thats want to be free dude thats is a great poem

Talia
November 24th, 2008, 04:55 PM
Wow, I love it :]