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ShatteredWings
November 6th, 2008, 03:28 PM
Do you hate me?

Do you hate me
For who I am?

For, who I am
I can’t change

I can’t change
The way I think

The way I think
Isn’t controllable

Controllable isn’t
My life

[is] my life
Worthless?

Worthless
[are] my feelings

My feelings
[are] strange

Strange
Is bad?

Is [it] bad
How I was born

How I was born
Am I malformed?

Am I malformd
For being the
one
person
I
know
best

Do you hate me?
Please,don’t

Productive feedback?

Requin
November 6th, 2008, 03:35 PM
Ummmm, worried about you. :-)
But it would make a good song. With a funky, techno alternative beat. It would be amazing. :-)

Donkey
November 6th, 2008, 03:59 PM
Very good -cheers and claps from audience-

ShatteredWings
November 6th, 2008, 04:01 PM
Ummmm, worried about you. :-)
yah i'm alright...
But it would make a good song. With a funky, techno alternative beat. It would be amazing. :-)
reallly?