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Justwondering
November 4th, 2008, 09:07 PM
Lies

Im lying here, Bleeding on the floor
Im done with this life, I cant take it anymore.
As I sit here with this knife and cut
I know Im only digging myself into a rut.
When I looked into your eyes, All I seen were lies
The things you did, were your disguise.
You said you would be here until the end
But its My heart you left me to mend.
I now lack the will to live
Because you took all I had to give.

nachtspiegel
November 5th, 2008, 12:01 AM
This is truly an amazing piece.

Zan0ra
November 5th, 2008, 02:43 PM
As said. Brilliant man :D keep them up.

japanman
November 6th, 2008, 01:46 PM
Pretty good lyrics, alittle to rhymy for me.

cookiegirl
November 6th, 2008, 04:17 PM
very sad poem but amazingly written i hope everything is ok

Justwondering
November 6th, 2008, 10:42 PM
This is truly an amazing piece.
Thank you (:

As said. Brilliant man :D keep them up.
Thank Ryan (:

Pretty good lyrics, alittle to rhymy for me.
I know, I usally try to throw in atleast two lines that dont rhyme, But this poem was one of those exceptions :P

very sad poem but amazingly written i hope everything is ok
Yeah everything is alright, Thank you (:, Poems are how I get out my feelings so it made me feel alot better ;D