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Justwondering
October 31st, 2008, 09:38 PM
So, I was looking through my grade 10 history notes and found the poem I wrote for the Trench assignment.

Trench Poem
Just hours ago we fought
It was nothing like I thought.
All around me bullets fly
Beside me is where my best friend lie.
Who knew this is how it would end
And to his family I must send.
The bad news, and the grief.
That they wished they would not recieve.
Not only is it their loss, but it is also mine
I keep telling myself I'll be fine.
But to this day, It was still my best friend who died.

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Zan0ra
November 4th, 2008, 02:53 PM
Brilliant :D

Requin
November 4th, 2008, 02:55 PM
Good!! Nice timing as well, coming up to rememberance sunday.