ShatteredWings
October 30th, 2008, 02:58 PM
Well quick info... it was suppsoed to be what my teacher calls a "persona poem".. written in someone else's point of view.
I chose a small child [7-8ish was what i wanted it to sound like]
Um.. where it gets to colors, origonally i had it tabbed over, but the forum won't reconize that
Time to see mommy
since she hit her head
… or so daddy said
World isn’t
...red
......or blue
.........or pink
.............or even yellow
It’s black and white and grey and brown
Teacher says that means
Mono-crome-attic
And Teacher knows best
World isn’t colors
World is scarry and dark if your alone
without a mommy
like Me
Time to see Mommy
maybe she’s better now?
Brother needs clothes
Shh, he’s sleeping
he’ll never know
Why we drive for miles
To see Mommy
Maybe Mommy’s better
Forever
or Maybe Mommy died…
i realize it's crappy, if you must point that out,be constructave
I chose a small child [7-8ish was what i wanted it to sound like]
Um.. where it gets to colors, origonally i had it tabbed over, but the forum won't reconize that
Time to see mommy
since she hit her head
… or so daddy said
World isn’t
...red
......or blue
.........or pink
.............or even yellow
It’s black and white and grey and brown
Teacher says that means
Mono-crome-attic
And Teacher knows best
World isn’t colors
World is scarry and dark if your alone
without a mommy
like Me
Time to see Mommy
maybe she’s better now?
Brother needs clothes
Shh, he’s sleeping
he’ll never know
Why we drive for miles
To see Mommy
Maybe Mommy’s better
Forever
or Maybe Mommy died…
i realize it's crappy, if you must point that out,be constructave