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cookiegirl
October 24th, 2008, 10:34 PM
I cant help but smile
every time i see you

your like a drug
i cant get enough

as soon as a date is done
i need another fix

i need to hear your voice
i love to feel your arms around me

i have always feared being so vulnerable
but i cant help it around you i am open and weak

The Batman
October 24th, 2008, 10:38 PM
OMG that is so sweet and wow I love it. It makes my eyes water because you can feel the emotion inside of it.

Θάνατος
October 24th, 2008, 10:40 PM
Wow nice poem. You are lucky to have to have each other.

Atonement
October 24th, 2008, 10:40 PM
Cute. I wonder when this was written.

Bobby
October 24th, 2008, 10:40 PM
The first read through, I thought it was boring and banal.

The second time through I thought of it in a different light - simple. It's very simple but still gets the message across.

DarkWingedAngel
October 24th, 2008, 10:43 PM
aww that reminds me of one of my current friends
she has this guy that she loves and she can't stay away from him
it is so cute

cookiegirl
October 24th, 2008, 11:09 PM
thanks everyone....

Θάνατος
October 24th, 2008, 11:39 PM
thanks everyone....

You are welcome.

theOperaGhost
October 25th, 2008, 12:22 AM
:D That makes me smile!

cookiegirl
October 25th, 2008, 10:32 AM
well it should its about you handsome

cookiegirl
October 27th, 2008, 10:57 PM
no more second best
no more just getting by
no more being told what love is
no more lies

no more hidding
no more being afraid of being hurt
no more looking at the past
no more regrets

more focus on the here and now
more trusting you
more of me
more of my heart being poured into everything i do

Mrawesome
February 11th, 2009, 05:30 PM
Awesomeeeeee