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Underground_Network
October 11th, 2008, 05:45 PM
This isn't what I asked for
Its something more than
What I really need...

This isn't what I wanted
What I needed
Its something else entirely...

And on this bridge between
The letters A and Z
I see indirectly, something seeing me...

Is it you that I really wanted?
Or are you something more,
Than what I needed (echo)?

Could you really be my
Only chance at
Living one more time?

Could you really see my
Insides intertwined
With the desires, I'm on fire (I'm on fire)

Could you understand that
I'm really not here
And you're not here either...

Could you be the answer
To my question
To my question...?

Fiending_the_freedom
October 28th, 2008, 11:58 PM
loved it
two fave lines are:
And on this bridge between
The letters A and Z
I see indirectly, something seeing me...

and

Could you really be my
Only chance at
Living one more time?

Stark
October 30th, 2008, 07:00 PM
I thought that was really great. I loved it.