rsc4life
October 7th, 2008, 08:20 PM
Can i have some feedback?
Brilliant right?
A corporate tie
swanky stuff
aged whiskey, it says 50 years.
had to be pretty damn omniscient
Are we just pawns
sort of clawing and scraping
sort of what-iffing?
Hop online
foolhardy swoons
crooning to someone
ha. wry that.
We're not Basho
not in tune with nature
We're in tune with the hebetudinous
no one else.
I cast aspersions
on already burdened minds.
Brilliant right?
A corporate tie
swanky stuff
aged whiskey, it says 50 years.
had to be pretty damn omniscient
Are we just pawns
sort of clawing and scraping
sort of what-iffing?
Hop online
foolhardy swoons
crooning to someone
ha. wry that.
We're not Basho
not in tune with nature
We're in tune with the hebetudinous
no one else.
I cast aspersions
on already burdened minds.