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cookiegirl
October 6th, 2008, 02:25 PM
My heart it leaks one drip at a time. Red, warm, rich blood. Dripping slowly my whole. No one cut it, it's not wounded. It just bleeds and bleeds and bleeds.

Blood drips slowly. The blood of Jesus Christ was holy. The heart it beats. When I'm angry it heats. Thump. Thump. Drip. Drip.

My heart it lets me live. It lets me lovingly give. My life slowly slips away. Each time I lay.

Bleeding and beating my whole life through. Does your heart do this too. Answer me how
Answer me now

Atonement
October 6th, 2008, 02:30 PM
Bleeding and beating my whole life through. Does your heart do this too. Answer me how
Answer me now

O...M...G... That was an amazingly poetic line. Wow.

cookiegirl
October 6th, 2008, 02:32 PM
thank you i love to write poetry i have a binder with 100 poems in it all written by me over a span of like 4 years some of them suck but others are ok like this one

theOperaGhost
October 6th, 2008, 05:20 PM
I think Addison likes you Alexa...:D

cookiegirl
October 6th, 2008, 06:03 PM
are you jealous jared? :p

Atonement
October 6th, 2008, 09:16 PM
Likes her? Sure, she's cool. Love her? nah, but I love her poetry.