Ashamed

[Mannequin]

I'm so ashamed.
I should have came
down from my high chair
on to the floor.
I'm so ashamed.
I've left marks
on people and cannot
erase the actions
I have commited these last days.
I'm so ashamed.
To be myself
To be no one else
To be anyone else
I'm so ashamed
I've caused myself
to believe in nothing else.
I'm so ashamed.
I've lost it all
spattering on a white sheet of paper
bleeding though the table beneath.
I'm so ashamed
I'll die this way.

[rsc4life]

That's a sad poem... But well written. Good work.

[ShatteredWings]

this is awsome, i like prose(sp??) better, by like alot

the line "on people and cannot/erase the actions", i think it would sound a bit better, like flow a lil more if you wrote "on people and i cannot/erase the actions"

other than that, this is really good. for whatever resason true feeling seems to make better writing