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Fiending_the_freedom
September 22nd, 2008, 08:56 PM
After a long writers block, this is what i came up with.


Guilt, and shame.


No way to block out the pain.


Have I changed, or are you blind?


What do you do, when the enemy is your mind?


Who can I trust, when my own words can be lies?


How do you know my "truth" isn't just an alibi?


If i believe the words I'm saying, does it make it a fabrication?


Self destruction is the strongest temptation.


Fighting the urges to destroy all the brain cells in my head,


Was always the hardest, since I want them all dead.


I needed someone to stop me, but nobody came.


Regret, you know, will drive me insane.

Callwaiting
September 23rd, 2008, 03:51 AM
That's really good!
I reckon that would make an awesome song, keep on writing!