Hope.

[Atonement]

Well I have this journal of poetry and this is one of the first ones I posted in there and I wanted to share it in a broader way, so here it goes.

Hope.

I want to let go,
I want to not cope,
I want to say no,
But I can't lose this hope.

I want to lose hope.
When all things are wrong,
I can't give up,
I am just too strong.

So much has happened,
Everything says to not go on,
But there are those that love me,
Those that think of me as their dawn.

All these people hoping,
Too many people care,
I keep on doubting,
Yet I say this little prayer.

"Even though I may be crazy,
Can I be healed?
I want to be free,
I want the truth to be revealed."

I want more than just faith,
I want to have a solution.
I need to find a way,
I need to have a retribution.

With my future barely uncertain,
I can't give up on something so clear,
I believe I have a life to come,
I just have to lose this fear.

My life is speeding before my eyes,
I dont know if I can cope.
I am so split on this...
I am giving into hope.

For the rest of the journal of Poetry Click me (http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/showthread.php?t=22963)

[george]

This really is one of your best poems. I read it while my dad was watching this movie that had this like....well the kinda music they play when someone "dies" but then comes back to live, like that revelation (?) type of music I guess. I hope the poem still applies Addi :)

[Callwaiting]

Wow you're really good at poetry :)
That one's pretty inspiring, and from what I've read of your journal, one of the best!

[Atonement]

Thank you. Anyone else?