My first try in a while.

[OMGitsDAVE]

Hey! It's been a long time since my last poem, so i decided to write one for my current girlfriend.

When i looked into your eyes,
I saw my biggest prize,
That prize was you,
I wanted to say i loved you too.

When i saw your golden blonde hair,
I didn't know if i should dare!
To ask you out,
I don't see why i had that doubt.

Now i've got you to my heart,
I don't think we'll ever part.


So yeah, rate and slate! =]

[Requin]

I don't know if girls find poetry flattering as their opinions are varied and very widespread.
But it's a good poem, not a prize winning one but a good one. Very flattering for her i'm sure, you make her sound very beautiful.
8/10 i'd say. :-)

[OMGitsDAVE]

Thanks. =]

[DrDrDrDrDr]

that sounds kinda creepy yet, well, just kinda creepy