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Callwaiting
September 7th, 2008, 10:54 AM
Well it's almost 2am and I just finished writing this poem, it's not my best but I think it came out okay.
Well, here it is:

demons inside of me
Fuelled by the beast
least devine of all angels
Heaven's deceased

The spirit still lingers
though somewhat diminished
Last page unread
When will it finish

Hope is not lost
it was never present here
Be one with the heartless
succumb to the fear

Aspiration abandoned
Naught left to dream
When you're six feet away
No-one can hear you scream

- Just feeling really depressed at the moment.

Please leave some constructive criticism or feedback of some sort :) .