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Underground_Network
September 2nd, 2008, 02:00 PM
In a broken down
Beaten down
On the ground
Society...

I'm dying alive
I'm dying to live
I'm dying to thrive
I'm dying tonight...

I want to
Not die here
But I fear
I'm too weak...

Light as a feather
When everything matters,
It floats away
Into the distance, nonexistence.

In a washed up
Wanna-be
Nothing's real
Society...

I'm dying alive
I'm dying to live
I'm dying to thrive
I'm dying tonight...

Oh I'm dying alive
I'm dying tonight
I'm dying tonight
I'm dying outright...

I'm dying tonight
I'm dying tonight
You can't save me now
You can't save me now...

I'm beaten, I'm lost
I'm too cold to defrost,
I'm burning alive
Yet I'm frozen as ice.

And I want to die,
No, I need to die,
I need to die,
To rise.

I'm dying alive
I'm dying to live
I'm dying to thrive
I'm dying tonight... (Tonight)

I

Fiending_the_freedom
September 4th, 2008, 02:45 AM
that was great.
my favourite line was:

I'm beaten, I'm lost
I'm too cold to defrost,
I'm burning alive
Yet I'm frozen as ice.

I love that.

Underground_Network
September 4th, 2008, 03:15 PM
Thanks Tegan. I'm glad you liked it. I just started school again and I'll be doing a lot of writing in my Creative Writing 2 class, so I'll try and post some stuff on here.

Fiending_the_freedom
September 4th, 2008, 10:12 PM
you'd better!