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Underground_Network
August 29th, 2008, 04:26 PM
In a time of
Hate and despair
Will you be there?
To save me, to care?

Will you love me,
Like I love you?
'Cuz if you can then,
I really need that...

I just need a,
Shoulder to lean on,
I just need you,
To hear me out.

In these hateful places,
It helps to have
Familiar faces,
Like yours...

'Cuz sometimes I need
Someone close,
To lend a hand
Or give me hope...

When all is hell
When all else fails,
I need a friend, or more than that
To help me out, to make my day.

In a place full
Of hate and destruction,
Will you save me,
When I need saving?

Oh I love you slowly,
I love you mostly,
But I'm not sure
If you love me back...

I need your body
To give me warmth and strength,
I need your mind
To give me hope and help me think...

I need you baby
I need you baby
Now more than
I've ever needed you before...

So will you be there,
When I need you?
Will you come here,
And stop the bleeding (of my heart)?

Atonement
August 29th, 2008, 04:43 PM
Beautiful.

theOperaGhost
August 29th, 2008, 04:50 PM
That's good, Adam! You really need to write some music too, because I'd love to hear these.

Rutherford The Brave
August 29th, 2008, 04:52 PM
*stands up in crowd and claps* BRAVO BRAVO MAGNIFICO!

Gumleaf
August 29th, 2008, 06:00 PM
fantastic adam, great words! :)

Kaleidoscope Eyes
August 30th, 2008, 02:57 PM
Wow, that was great! I love the rhythm of it all, and the sort of irregular rime scheme, it just all flows so nicely. Keep up the good work! :) Also, like Jared said, it would be awesome to hear some music to go with your words sometime.