Once A Wiseman Said...

[tonyrocker14]

Once a wiseman said...
nothing anyone would care about.

And the wiseman words went ...
nowhere anyone would look for them.

Once a wiseman stated...
nothing anyone would follow.

Once a wiseman showed...
nothing anyone would see.

Then the wiseman disappeared
but his words kept floating in the years.

And if you have the chance to find them,
dont let them loose again and unlock the knowledge.


-written by me-

[george]

that's actually pretty good :)

makes you think

[josh92]

Wo that sounds like something that could be in a school text book keep it up!

[Serenity]

I LOVE the concept but I feel like it could've been written better- it doesn't really have much flow to it.

[Random_oso06]

wow it does give advise i can use it good