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7tweety
August 15th, 2008, 09:39 PM
Burning,
No smothering
Alight
It seems these tears
That doeth sting
Cry out
Reach out from recesses within
Hmm
The Burn
The Pain
The Sting
….alive
and glowing
If only...
…could go away
never
wanting it to stay
aaah…
some ease
some way out
I seek to find an answer
No doubt!
I need to let go of his fiery clout!

theOperaGhost
August 15th, 2008, 10:01 PM
I like how you wrote that, 7tweety. It's very good.

Ryandel
August 15th, 2008, 10:30 PM
"Fiery Clout"

Love that description.