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Atonement
July 20th, 2008, 12:00 PM
Stop hurting me,
I don't want to play,
I am sick of your shit,
Day after day.

Why do you keep stalking me,
Why can't you just go,
All you do all day,
Is make me feel low.

Get out of my face,
I want you gone,
Please just stop already,
I want to move on.

You have done this,
Going on eight years,
You have done this enough,
You've confirmed all my fears.

Get away from me,
I am done,
It's over already,
You have won.

SirRawrsalot
July 20th, 2008, 12:23 PM
"You have won."

No, that person hasn't.

I loved that poem, it spoke to me, it said 3 things, 1) don't give up and let people win 2) don't let people get to your head. It's all a matter of perspective and opinion. and 3) friday was pizza day the best day of the week :P (inside joke lol)

Zephyr
July 20th, 2008, 12:37 PM
So you took my stalker idea :P
Muy bien = ]

Atonement
July 20th, 2008, 05:58 PM
Elliot: Ha ha... friday is soooo no pizza day.

Steph: Not intentionally, as I was writing this it just popped into myy head and made perfect sense.

theOperaGhost
July 20th, 2008, 11:51 PM
I think that is my favorite of all of your poems, however I am a fan of your writing, so I like them all. Very good, Addison.