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Atonement
July 19th, 2008, 06:31 PM
Burden.

I am sorry
I dont want in your way,
I dont want to burden,
Just had to say...

I needed some help,
Just not from you,
For you had some other,
Things to do.

Don't let me stop you,
Just push me aside,
It doesn't matter,
Instead I just cried.

It's not that important,
To keep you awake,
Just let me sit here,
So I will break.

I would be better,
If I had your care,
But I can't speak up,
This I swear.

Maybe you could've helped,
If only I had said the line,
I dont want to burden you,
But... I think I am no longer fine.

I regret to say anything,
I made a mistake,
All I know to do,
Is sit here and shake.

SirRawrsalot
July 19th, 2008, 06:36 PM
:( I'm sorry you believe everyone is burdened by you because you shouldn't lie to yourself.

Edit: Forgot to mention, beautiful poem. I wish I could rhyme like that.

Ryandel
July 19th, 2008, 07:19 PM
Wow... Exactly how I think... thanks for that beautiful work. I guess I can trust you now Addison. Thanks.

-Alex D

Zephyr
July 19th, 2008, 11:40 PM
Wonderful hun = ]
And as I've said,
You're no burden at all.

theOperaGhost
July 20th, 2008, 01:46 AM
Once again, great writing, Addison. You really don't give yourself enough credit for the stuff you write, it's good.
And you are not a burden to us at all. Plus, we don't want to push you aside, we like you. You are a great, intelligent person, there's no reason we should want to push you aside.

Atonement
July 20th, 2008, 11:42 AM
Thanks everyone.