A poem I wrote.

[BlackenedSilver]

I wrote this ages ago and personally dont think its any good. But the people I have shown it to say it is. So please tell me your opinion!


I dont know why I bother
to try and smile everyday
cause now tha your not with me
My shine has gone away

I wish that you would care
If I live or die
But you never did
and now I cry and cry

Now everything is building up, in my mind
and in my head
I just dont want to care anymore
and forever go to bed

I cut my wrists with a blade
to make the pain go away
But all I get is a moment of relief
and an addiction to make me pay

So I tr and carry on
as I keep on getting dull
slowly I turn black.
The silvers gone forever,
and never coming back.

xxx:confused:

[Ryandel]

Flows with the emotion of the writer. I can relate to this poem. Excellent poem

-Alex

[monde]

This poem really touches my heart,
i am almost in same situation at the moment, which this poem discribes.
Just this cutting part is out.