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Anonymous
October 15th, 2005, 09:25 PM
Dancing shadows prance amongest the walls trying to find a place to expose themselves completely.
the are trapped amongest another character trying to find a will.
There is nothing left inside them, there is nothing else to feel.
They danced along my bare walls so gracefully at once.
Now they mope to the side as all the other objects are still in hide.
...
the shadow of me used to dance so beautifully,
It used to smile at itself.
blame others for its faults.
The shadows were so innocent.

Now they rest in peace.
there are no more shadows dancing on my walls.
Because everything has died.
There is no more sensitivity in my room.
All the shadows are now hid inside of me.
where they were always meant to be.

kolte
October 15th, 2005, 09:55 PM
It was truly beautiful. i really enjoyed it. never stop writing austin. don't ever give up.

Elokyn
October 16th, 2005, 04:44 PM
That's awesome Austin, keep it up