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ShatteredWings
July 7th, 2008, 06:16 PM
this is fictional, based on my imagination

Helloooo!

I’m a girl, 14, and, oh yea, I’m a freak xDD just an fyi for y’alls


…actually, I think I wont babble and get to the story neyhnyhy
Anyways, here’s my story:


Couple days ago, I was at school [yes genious I show up, and do perty well]. Whatever right? Well my teachers seem to like me a lot for some reason. I’m serious, my englihs teacher ADORES me. Wtf?. Well anyway, after class she called me over – me being me I’m scared outta me head – and askes me why I’m not doing school paper. My reaction: ????. I don’t want 2first off, second I have enough to do with the roboics , third, brothers, need I say more?

Anywayz, she still pesters until I insist on leaving for this thing called –wait for it – lunch!!!
Okay, lunch was a way to get out of the room. Its not like I enjoy eating in the same room as like 200 peoples…its creepy. But, since I said I was going to, I’ll eat today. Fine. To bad my bestie Kays don’t have the same lunch as me (she has second lunch I have third). :( shes like the only person Im confertable with.
Ohwell.

Rest of the day is boring-smoring. Well not totally. I managed to make my robot work, finaly. Yay!

Hm, well later, after dinner (which yes, I ate so haha you), I have swimteam. Almost everynight. Haha, its actually fun. I get to attack water and see if I can pass the older girls…yeah, they don’t like me much. Cause I’m in highschool, but won’t do HSswimteam. Hell no! I have enough to do w/o having to swim 3-7:30 daily. Not my thing. And school is important too ya know. Whatever, I don’t care much.as has been said I’m a freak anyway

So when I get home, then my outfit is commented on. …mom, you’ve seen it already, and now, now you comment?? Yesss…I’m wearing a tanktop over a long sleved shirt. So?

Okay, enough story-telling, this is weird. Cya


And my english teacher claims i'm an orginzed writer.

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SirRawrsalot
July 7th, 2008, 07:07 PM
lmao, not a short story, more like improv! It's new. I like the idea. Just start writing about whatever you think about and roll with it. I should do that. lol +rep for the inspiration

ShatteredWings
July 7th, 2008, 07:40 PM
improv? do tell, whats that?

SirRawrsalot
July 7th, 2008, 07:43 PM
Improv is where you make stuff up as you go. You just start acting or writting or anything just making it up as you go along. No real plan or idea of what tto write (you can have an idea and just make stuff up on the spot though).

kerry
July 8th, 2008, 01:11 PM
cool

ShatteredWings
July 9th, 2008, 10:37 AM
hm, thanks fer the defintion

i was really really bored when i wrote it too haha