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Underground_Network
July 7th, 2008, 05:37 PM
Here we go,
I want to die tonight,
Oh here we go,
I want to cry tonight...

Sometimes I'd rather
Engage in thoughtful
Conversation, most times
I'd rather be dead instead

I don't know what to do at this point,
It seems there's an ache in every joint,
This pain won't go away that easy,
In fact it's kinda makin' me queasy...

Can't breath, can't think, can't hold on no longer,
This stinks, this hurts, this is makin' me crazy,
No more, no more, I swear to you baby,
I'll die before I take another step [towards you]...

Sometimes at night I tell myself please,
Don't go away, no not today,
It hurts too much (way too much),
And I know how it hurts you too.

I want to die on a Sunday morning,
I want you all to fucking mourn me,
I want to die on a sunny day,
I want to die and fade away...

Cuz nobody wants, cuz nobody needs me,
I want to die because nobody sees me,
The way I want them to,
Please watch the blood run down my forehead [yeah-e-yeah]

I want to die on a Sunday morning,
I want you all to fucking mourn me,
I want to die on a sunny day,
I want to die and fade away...

So fight the cliff and say "no more",
So fight the edges and hang on longer,
Don't give in, it only makes you stronger,
And that is why I die, tonight.

Because I'm nothing but a stranger,
With awkward advice, its almost deranged,
That I'm helping you out,
Yet I'm dying inside [and out by now]

It hurts to breath
It hurts to concentrate,
Its so irate, it burns me,
And I can't take this [not at all]

So light me up on fire baby,
And watch me burn away [please save me]
Fade into ashes, and forget
All I ever was [and all I could've been]

Bobby
July 7th, 2008, 05:38 PM
I had a hard time working out how the chorus would go with music, but never the less, the lyrics are nice.

Underground_Network
July 7th, 2008, 05:41 PM
Yeah, I wanted to work in repetition, but couldn't really figure out what to do with it. I had a really good song idea in my head, but the words escaped me, so I took the rhythm of that song and just put these lyrics in instead. It may not be the best, as I constantly just randomly think of things in my head and type them up as fast as I can [so I don't forget anything]. This is kind of one of those songs that could probably be separated into two or three songs [by taking the ideas out and making better songs out of each "individual" idea]

SirRawrsalot
July 7th, 2008, 06:48 PM
lol I loved reading it, not because it was excellent (it was :D ), but because it's such a dramatic change in language. My poems versus this song. It's really interesting (for me). I loved it.