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Tis_Sam
July 7th, 2008, 04:42 PM
The blank page. The flashing line appears and vanishes a hundred times. What to write? I know how I feel about you, if there were a way to show you other than compressing such feelings to words on a page I’d gladly. You complete me, without you I’m lost. You’re the most amazing person I’ve ever met, even when I lose my words you understand. You make me feel wanted; I hope I make you feel the same. As I said I’m not good with words, but this I can say, I love you and I always will, I want to spend every moment of my life with you. These words show what can be said on paper, but the feeling you give me is something much better and I want to hold on to this forever. Us.

[She liked this one btw :rolleyes:]

SirRawrsalot
July 7th, 2008, 05:31 PM
Meaningful. One of the most important part of a poem is making it mean something to everyone. I enjoyed it :D