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[SirRawrsalot]

Trying something new out:


One

I am alone with the winter sky
And while I am alone
The sky is mine to wear-
An icy turban testing my will
To bear it part of me.
Infinity does intimidate, does impel
I rebel.



Two

The golden hair of early morning
Sweeps across the frosty grass.
I walk away regretfully looking back.
I am a thief, the day a young blond lass.
I wonder which of us can be seduced
Or can atone for weak response.
Today is a tempting thought. I hurt.



Three

I am now-
Surely a special man
Caught between the oppression of times before
And all fraud inherent
In hopes of a better tomorrow.
Who are you?
Are you brave enough to love me?



Four

What moral measures life?
What should lovers say?
Truth was plundered yesterday
When the impotence of somehow let us die.
Someday is coming much too late.
Somewhere is a bolted garden gate.
I am afraid that tomorrow is a lie.




Umm... for comments, anything really. Good, bad, also please (if you can) which part is your favorite. 1-4 thanks for reading.

[iJack]

I like them all! Very nice!

[SirRawrsalot]

Thank you!

[Kuervo]

those are some cool poems, i think they're. tell me im right.

[SirRawrsalot]

You are right they're cool poems. lol Thanks a lot.

[Kuervo]

You are right they're cool poems. lol Thanks a lot.
maybe you should become a poet one day, because those poems are awesome dude

[SirRawrsalot]

It's more of a pressure relief. And I get a good poem probably one out of every twenty or so. I mean like... even I'm impressed with myself good.

[Kuervo]

you should be impressed, well your 17, you have more intelligence and more creativity when you get older

[SirRawrsalot]

I wrote a twist of lemon (http://virtualteen.org/forums/showthread.php?t=26394) when I was 13. I think it's in my top 4.

[Kuervo]

see, you have the gift of a poet

[SirRawrsalot]

I couldn't do it as a job. Hobby and stress reliever, but I'm flattered at the idea of it though :D Thanks. Best comment I've ever had on my poems. +rep

[Random_oso06]

ya i think you will make a good poet just don't get scared about others cuz there is all ways someone who likes it

[SirRawrsalot]

Thanks. I'm used to some people hating my favorite poem, but loving the on I think is the worst written. I think poetry it mostly about interpretation.

[kerry]

They are nice ! like all of them

[DarkWingedAngel]

dude sooo totaly sick and awesome

[SirRawrsalot]

lmao. I'll take sick as a good thing. No one I know says it. Thanks both of you :)

[DarkWingedAngel]

sick means like cool

[Tis_Sam]

No one uses the phrase "Sick" anymore but yes. Very cool

[SirRawrsalot]

Thanks :D