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SirRawrsalot
July 4th, 2008, 01:02 PM
8th poem on VT:

Ode To Hypocrisy

My life is play I live today,
A fellow said to me;
I shall be droll beyond control
And have great fun, you'll see.

You are a fool, a wasteful fool,
I heard a man reply;
Just heed the doom of yonder tomb
For we are sure to die.

The strong duress of somberness
Stung the clown to tears,
He with a sigh began to cry
I know he'll cry for years.

The loss-of-glee-absurdity
Consumed the stoic's fret.
I saw him smile then laugh awhile.
He may be laughing yet.

I ask no laurels for simple morals.
Avoid a creed defection;
Adopt no stand as most do and
Be nothing to perfection.



Comments, good things, bad things, everything, anything, all are appreciated!

Bobby
July 4th, 2008, 01:12 PM
Very good. Honest, raw.

SirRawrsalot
July 4th, 2008, 01:21 PM
Thanks. I love this one. My 3rd favorite poem I've ever written.

Sugaree
July 4th, 2008, 04:09 PM
Agreed with Bobby. Very good!

SirRawrsalot
July 4th, 2008, 04:13 PM
Thanks a lot for reading and for the rep too :D