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SirRawrsalot
July 3rd, 2008, 11:22 PM
number 6:

Fantasy And Reprise

Love once danced among the stars
And cloaked the purple sky
With awe.
Too soon the haunting tune
Replaced the real.
But pain remained
And joy of pain.
The purple mists of time
Soared around my head.

The shadow men
Will never really care
About my secret place
Where all the silent faces pray
To silent gods.

Gone and silent echoes
Chant again the theme
In ghostly decibels
Beyond all stony ears.

Stroke the fire
Scream at the walls
Burn at the eyes of the stony men

And the echo

Stroke the fire
Scream at the walls
Burn at the eyes of the stony men

Yet I still know
That all the shadows can not steal
The briefest instant
I alone have shared with ghosts.

And any tears of mine belonging
At least to finer things,
To bridal flowers and endless peace
To endless love
For you and me.

These words are words
And can they speak
An end to this
Which never was
But is?

george
July 4th, 2008, 12:00 AM
Nice and peaceful :) Honestly it reminds me of cave mend for some odd reason.

SirRawrsalot
July 4th, 2008, 12:01 AM
lol Ya, I've gotten that impression myself while re-reading this a few times. Thanks for the comment. :D

japanman
July 4th, 2008, 12:50 AM
OOoooOoOOoOo awsome :D i t w a s a w s o m e.

SirRawrsalot
July 4th, 2008, 12:52 AM
lol thanks. :D Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

japanman
July 4th, 2008, 01:17 AM
Um i just thought of another word for it fantasy? How about fantastical.

SirRawrsalot
July 4th, 2008, 01:20 AM
Fantastical can be taken as fantastic meaning great. Fantasy can really only be taken as fiction which is what I needed.