SirRawrsalot
July 3rd, 2008, 04:30 PM
5th poem on vt:
I Pray The Mask Is Rent
One finger on the key
One note
One simple sound
And pitch
One life for sharing
Only one-
One voice to sing
One song
One well to wet the sand
Not streams-
No time for spring
Or June
No words for blossomed hills
Or leaves
Or death
Or love fulfilled
And true-
But what we mean
And are
And what we cannot know
But feel
Is all I share
I pray the mask is rent
And what you see of me
Is very much of you.
This one's my favorite so be as harsh and negative (in a constructive way) as you can so I can make a better one. Or be nice. Both are appreciated. :D Thanks for reading.
I Pray The Mask Is Rent
One finger on the key
One note
One simple sound
And pitch
One life for sharing
Only one-
One voice to sing
One song
One well to wet the sand
Not streams-
No time for spring
Or June
No words for blossomed hills
Or leaves
Or death
Or love fulfilled
And true-
But what we mean
And are
And what we cannot know
But feel
Is all I share
I pray the mask is rent
And what you see of me
Is very much of you.
This one's my favorite so be as harsh and negative (in a constructive way) as you can so I can make a better one. Or be nice. Both are appreciated. :D Thanks for reading.