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Anonymous
October 12th, 2005, 08:16 PM
With these chains on my ankles, I relentlessly pick up my feet.
I continue walking, muscles ache, hard to breathe.
I continue following this path.
It seems that I would have learned.
Because of my foolishness, many have been hurt.
I try taking it all in, try not absorbing all the pain.
My sides are so mallaeable, that nothing is ever the same.

Walking in another puddle, preying not to be seen,
this shame I have felt so many times,
I am the one to blame.

teencrazykid
October 12th, 2005, 08:51 PM
WOW!!!!!!! That is so great! And it is really deep. You should really get yourself published!!!! I bet you'd have NO problem whatsoever!!!!!!

Anonymous
October 13th, 2005, 12:40 PM
thanks. :)