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Mannequin
June 27th, 2008, 10:10 PM
Imprisoned.
Immobile.
Trail of events..STOP.
I'm a lie.
Tainted.
Diseased.

A series of flaws
lead to a downfall.
When do I become
something I'm proud of?

How, Why, When, Where?
Only to break
in a frightful scare.

I'm lost, insecure, petty...but how?
I am a product of two.
So normal in their own right.
I'm such a disaster in their sight.

Hard, Alone, Scared.
Not that people read or respond.
I cannot feel myself again.
Reality lies.
I'm a just a piece of your credentials.
I cannot justify this feeling,
Only want to feel revealing...

krystalm
June 27th, 2008, 10:18 PM
i like this, oh how i wish i had a way with words!

DaretoFallup
June 27th, 2008, 11:25 PM
wow thats good

Techno Monster
June 28th, 2008, 12:20 AM
That was a good one.

Underground_Network
June 28th, 2008, 08:27 AM
That was a great one Austin. And you have to realize, many people do read these, I think this section is virtually untouched by guests, which is the reason the number of views are so low in comparison to the number of views of other threads in other areas. I also think some people just don't know how to respond, I know sometimes I read something so amazing that I don't really know what to say. I think saying "good job" or even "that was amazing" would be understatements. So yeah, people do read these, and quite often people do respond. I, like you, do wish this section would get a bit more attention though.