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teencrazykid
October 9th, 2005, 01:20 AM
Why should I listen?
Why should I care?
What are you going to do?
Hit me-I dare you.
My problems are insignificant
And my troubles are annoying
Yet when I look at you
It just gets worse and worse
Determined, to start a life
All my own
This place isn't home
Not anymore
I'll grab my belongings, go downstairs
Walk out the front door.
I'm not coming back anymore

Whisper
October 9th, 2005, 02:32 AM
Thats beautiful

"Why should I listen?
Why should I care?
What are you going to do?
Hit me-I dare you."

I love that

Oath
October 9th, 2005, 01:01 PM
That was really good i loved it

Elokyn
October 9th, 2005, 02:41 PM
yeah that's great!

teencrazykid
October 10th, 2005, 04:59 PM
Thanks!!!! (sry I didnt respond earlier..)

PunkPotterKid7
July 14th, 2008, 06:13 PM
i kinda feel tht way sometimes too.

monde
July 19th, 2008, 01:44 PM
It's really sad but to be honest, this sadness there is so beautiful.
It touches people and makes you think about what you just read.
I really like it. Keep 'em coming when ever you have this right feeling to write sth :)