Electric Hurricane

[Underground_Network]

This is an electric hurricane
This is the end of the beginning
This is an electric hurricane
This is the end of it all...

The is the end of eternity,
This is the storm of the ages,
This is the end of eternity,
This wasn't in the forecast, no!

This is an electric hurricane,
It's not a fucking category 5,
This is an electric hurricane,
It's more like a category 6.

This is the end of eternity,
Say goodbye to your loved ones now,
This is the end of eternity,
This is the apocalypse et al.

This is an electric hurricane,
A storm so fierce and d-structive,
This is an electric hurricane,
Oh nobody will survive it.

This is an electric hurricane,
This is the end of eternity,
This is an electric hurricane,
This is the end of, of it all...

[Kaleidoscope Eyes]

Nice. Normally repetition gets to me, but I feel it worked nicely here. It would go really well with a heavy bass line and some techno-like sounds behind it. I really like the phrases "apocolypse et al" and "d-structive", very creative. The line, "It's more like a category 6" sort of seemed to jar a little though. I realize there's a different between categories 5 and 6, but it almost seemed like there wasn't a bit enough difference to get your point across. Sort of like saying, "It's gonna be hot tomorrow. Not 100 degrees but 110." Maybe exaggerate a little, create your own category.

Overall though, I liked it. Nice work. :)

[Underground_Network]

Thanks. I know, sometimes I post things on here that have been revised and that I've thought a lot about, but this just popped into my head and I just typed it up straight on here without having typed it up anywhere before. I didn't expect it to be anywhere near perfect, but I'm glad you liked it. I actually usually record these songs [sometimes even poems] to my computer in case I forgot their "sound", but I didn't record this one, so I don't 100% remember how it kind of is supposed to sound, but yeah, I agree, that one part with the category 5 then category 6 could be "fixed" or "made better".