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Oath
October 7th, 2005, 11:13 PM
Not one of my best poems:

A pool of water sit at my feet
no one cares or knows how deep
the water spilled out from my vains
But it seemed to cause me no pain
The water didnt take the pain away
for the water just let me lay
Lay there on the ground
with my face thrown down
Mad at the sky
for not saying good-bye :pump:

the_hope_house
October 8th, 2005, 09:35 PM
I like this one it's deep...

Oath
October 12th, 2005, 03:50 PM
welll.....

teencrazykid
October 12th, 2005, 07:21 PM
I like this one it's deep...

agreed