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Anonymous
October 6th, 2005, 07:57 PM
The wind sweeps across the demented, teenage boy's face. His black hair whistles as the thorned plants bleed scarlet red ink from thier sharp edges.
He stares down at the ground waitng to be called on. Unfortunantly he blends in so well in the dark. Inside his mind is an angry mob fighting over nothing. He stares down at the palms of his gnarled hands. The cuts and bruises still mingle down his arms. He slowly waits amongest the thorned bushes waiting until he expresses an emotion strong enough to end his life.

Hi i am jon
October 7th, 2005, 12:25 AM
wow thats descriptive as hell........its awesome!, thats somthin it sounds like that would be in a cool book........make more of those kinds it looked cooler than most stuff i have read in me life....nice job

Whisper
October 7th, 2005, 01:23 AM
sounds like me....

i like it
go austin!

Elokyn
October 7th, 2005, 06:05 PM
That's great austin!

Oath
October 7th, 2005, 11:26 PM
i thought it was great

Anonymous
October 8th, 2005, 10:13 AM
:hug:

teencrazykid
October 11th, 2005, 01:36 PM
:arrow: :arrow: :arrow: yeah that was good. It didnt come straight out, yet it was terribly honest