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Sugaree
June 12th, 2008, 07:39 PM
Ok so I've just gotten back into writing and I just wanted to go ahead and share my work with you. So just sit back and enjoy!


"Goodbye"

They're so simple aren't they?
Friends are simple.
Family is simple.
Love sees through.
They understand.

They're our friends.
But, they're still confused.
Our customs differ.
They'll never understand the real us.

So we went our seperate ways.
One to be the master.
The other to be protige.
But, we co-exist in the stars.
Now they're a part of who we are.

So we share laughs
And together shed the tears we cry.
But when they die, you're on your own.
Nothing but dissolving memories remain.

No one is there to fill the gap.
No is there to remember the joy.
No on is there for your tears.

'Cos you were both the core.
She was the comfort for you.
She was the joy.
You were the provider.
You were the reason of life within her.

Now she's gone.
All you feel is the pain.

"Help me," she said "frome this pain."
Then she picks herself up and leaves.
You ask "Where are you going?"
She looks back and says "Home."

Without thinking you say "Goodbye"
She disappears through the open door.....she's gone.
But this bond will never end with "Goodbye".

"Apocalyptic"

The cloudless sky with blistering heat.
The Earth feels like a stove.
Gentle breeze cools it down.

Grass so green.
Water so clean.
Vision so pure.
My days seems endless with these.

Shades of purple and orange.
The smell of freshly poured whiskey.
Life is at a stand still.

The sun meets the horizon.
Red flashes in the sky.
A rumble shakes the Earth.

The sky turns black.
The Earth's surface cracks.
Fire comes down from the Heavens!

The Red Dragon shows.
Engulfing the Earth.
Demons form out of the sea.

The Angel of Death
falls from the sky above.

Then a blue light appears.
It calls the names of others.
With each name a ray of
light causes them to
fall to the ground.

Your name is called.
In one daring attempt
you run for the last thread
of life you have.

Then the ray appears.
Abra-kadabra! Darkness.
Something crawls up your leg.
It grabs hold of your neck.
A blinding light appears.
It disappears to the blue sky above.

you get up to look around.
Everything was as it was before the terror.
It was all a dream.....dream well.

"Broken"

So, you found that one thing missing in your life?
That one special person who would never backstab
and break your heart?

She will one day. Keep telling yourself it won't happen.
She can't tell her secret.
You'll never know.
She took you in and took your love.
When you were weak she broke your heart.

Now it will never know love again.



If you have any questions then please ask. I'll be happy to answer them!

japanman
June 13th, 2008, 04:32 PM
I LOVE THEM they rock dude you have the skills to became a real good writer.

Sugaree
June 13th, 2008, 04:33 PM
I'm not sure if I would really be into writing that much. It's just something I do in spare time

japanman
June 13th, 2008, 05:17 PM
Well if yo ever decdeto you he potential :)

kerry
June 14th, 2008, 09:17 AM
i like it great !