Underground_Network
June 7th, 2008, 11:32 AM
...that I might work on over the summer...
I actually started writing this two years ago, and since I wrote this part [2 years ago] I have not made any changes... I can tell you I have matured as a writer and plan on changing some things, but still, let me know what you think [this is pretty gruesome, so if you don't want to read something like that, don't continue reading]
"Keine Gnade"
It was around noon on a hot, sunny, summer day in Tallahassee, Florida. A man in a black suit walked nonchalantly down the street. A large scar stretched across his face, and he looked like a roughed up, beaten, middle-aged man. The man looked as if he had been through many hardships and had been a hardened soldier at one point. The man was rather large, probably weighing close to 300 pounds, and looked to be slightly over six feet tall. He was carrying a shiny black suitcase and looked as if he had no cares in the world. His face showed no signs of emotion. The man in the black suit, a member of an infamous gang known as Keine Gnade stepped into a building of mass proportions. The building was owned by AlphaCorp. AlphaCorp, a corporation that basically owns the world, is a maker of almost any technological device you could think of. They make cell phones, laptops, home computers, faxes, copy machines, etc. AlphaCorp has connections with Keine Gnade, as the owner of AlphaCorp is Javier Portero, a high ranking member of Keine Gnade. Despite the fact that Keine Gnade is German, there are many Hispanic and African American members, though the rest are mostly Germans, and if they are Caucasian, but not German, they are most likely Russian or Dutch. The man in the black suit walked up to the main lobbyist and whispered, “Tod wird jetzt kommen.” The lobbyist, a petite, young woman with a sticker on her shirt that read: Hi My Name Is Alison; did not understand German, so she did not understand what he said. What he had said in German was, “death shall come now." As soon as she looked up, a huge explosion was heard, and the entire building shook violently. The entire first floor was incinerated, the building burnt to the ground. There were no survivors.
The leader of Keine Gnade, a man by the name of Jefrey Heifetz, an ex-member of the German secret police, whose grandfather had been a Nazi, was a ruthless killer who had the ability to persuade nearly anyone to do anything. He was the one who convinced Heinrich Wentz to kill himself by attaching a bomb to his own chest, in order to prove himself worthy enough to go to Himmel, the German word for Heaven. Jefrey Heifetz had major connections to everything and everyone. He was friends with the head director of the CIA, he had influence over the FBI, one of the reasons killings linked to his organization were usually not thoroughly investigated, and he had connections with the White House, as one of the men who works for him, Benjamin Voinovich, is a member of the secret service, and a very good friend of the president’s. Heifetz also has ties to the Russian Mafia, the German government, the KGB, and a plethora of drug cartels in South America and Mexico. Heifetz served in both the German Army and United States Military. He was regarded as one of the best snipers in the world. He snapped at the age of 31, when, at his parent’s house in Gulfport, Mississippi, returning from fighting in Afghanistan, three men burst into his house toting AK-47s. They shot his father as soon as he made a move towards them. They then shot Heifetz in the leg and proceeded to brutally rape his mother. Each man took a turn, and then when they were finished, the man that seemed to be in charge shot her in the head. He saw her head literally explode, as blood splattered all over the place. The men walked over to him, but instead of killing him, they subdued him, and brought him to the Keine Gnade headquarters in a small, deserted town in southern Texas. Heifetz killed the leader at the time; a man named Hans Metz, and proceeded to take over the organization. Heifetz, now 37, is a man feared by many, but admired by many as well. Heifetz will stop at nothing to get what he wants, and what he wants as of now, is for Christopher Quinn, the president of the United States, to die.
I actually started writing this two years ago, and since I wrote this part [2 years ago] I have not made any changes... I can tell you I have matured as a writer and plan on changing some things, but still, let me know what you think [this is pretty gruesome, so if you don't want to read something like that, don't continue reading]
"Keine Gnade"
It was around noon on a hot, sunny, summer day in Tallahassee, Florida. A man in a black suit walked nonchalantly down the street. A large scar stretched across his face, and he looked like a roughed up, beaten, middle-aged man. The man looked as if he had been through many hardships and had been a hardened soldier at one point. The man was rather large, probably weighing close to 300 pounds, and looked to be slightly over six feet tall. He was carrying a shiny black suitcase and looked as if he had no cares in the world. His face showed no signs of emotion. The man in the black suit, a member of an infamous gang known as Keine Gnade stepped into a building of mass proportions. The building was owned by AlphaCorp. AlphaCorp, a corporation that basically owns the world, is a maker of almost any technological device you could think of. They make cell phones, laptops, home computers, faxes, copy machines, etc. AlphaCorp has connections with Keine Gnade, as the owner of AlphaCorp is Javier Portero, a high ranking member of Keine Gnade. Despite the fact that Keine Gnade is German, there are many Hispanic and African American members, though the rest are mostly Germans, and if they are Caucasian, but not German, they are most likely Russian or Dutch. The man in the black suit walked up to the main lobbyist and whispered, “Tod wird jetzt kommen.” The lobbyist, a petite, young woman with a sticker on her shirt that read: Hi My Name Is Alison; did not understand German, so she did not understand what he said. What he had said in German was, “death shall come now." As soon as she looked up, a huge explosion was heard, and the entire building shook violently. The entire first floor was incinerated, the building burnt to the ground. There were no survivors.
The leader of Keine Gnade, a man by the name of Jefrey Heifetz, an ex-member of the German secret police, whose grandfather had been a Nazi, was a ruthless killer who had the ability to persuade nearly anyone to do anything. He was the one who convinced Heinrich Wentz to kill himself by attaching a bomb to his own chest, in order to prove himself worthy enough to go to Himmel, the German word for Heaven. Jefrey Heifetz had major connections to everything and everyone. He was friends with the head director of the CIA, he had influence over the FBI, one of the reasons killings linked to his organization were usually not thoroughly investigated, and he had connections with the White House, as one of the men who works for him, Benjamin Voinovich, is a member of the secret service, and a very good friend of the president’s. Heifetz also has ties to the Russian Mafia, the German government, the KGB, and a plethora of drug cartels in South America and Mexico. Heifetz served in both the German Army and United States Military. He was regarded as one of the best snipers in the world. He snapped at the age of 31, when, at his parent’s house in Gulfport, Mississippi, returning from fighting in Afghanistan, three men burst into his house toting AK-47s. They shot his father as soon as he made a move towards them. They then shot Heifetz in the leg and proceeded to brutally rape his mother. Each man took a turn, and then when they were finished, the man that seemed to be in charge shot her in the head. He saw her head literally explode, as blood splattered all over the place. The men walked over to him, but instead of killing him, they subdued him, and brought him to the Keine Gnade headquarters in a small, deserted town in southern Texas. Heifetz killed the leader at the time; a man named Hans Metz, and proceeded to take over the organization. Heifetz, now 37, is a man feared by many, but admired by many as well. Heifetz will stop at nothing to get what he wants, and what he wants as of now, is for Christopher Quinn, the president of the United States, to die.