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AutumnDae
June 6th, 2008, 05:38 PM
Don't cry pretty baby.
It's all over now.
He won't be bothering you anymore.
I'm here to protect you.

Don't worry pretty baby.
He can't hurt you anymore.
I'll stay with you until you're okay.
I'll shield you from the pain.

Don't scream pretty baby.
It was all just a dream.
He was inside your head.
I want to save you.

Don't cry pretty baby.
I chased the monsters away.
kerry
July 8th, 2008, 01:09 PM
thats is very good
:P
SirRawrsalot
July 8th, 2008, 05:22 PM
I liked it :D
monde
July 19th, 2008, 01:50 PM
Oh, it's really good. It would be turned into a song, it would sound awesome.
ShatteredWings
July 19th, 2008, 02:27 PM
Oh, it's really good. It would be turned into a song, it would sound awesome.

haah. a slightly harsh kids song :P

very nice though..i can't write much..and i can't ryhme to safe me life
death_to_my_heart
July 9th, 2011, 10:42 AM
haah. a slightly harsh kids song :P

very nice though..i can't write much..and i can't ryhme to safe me life

teehee i have this same problem
ShatteredWings
July 9th, 2011, 06:24 PM
08 bump. Check post dates