Poetry

[GRB123]

I am a boy and I would like to write some of the poems i have made and am afraid to show my family and freinds. please tell me what you think. By the way these are based off of someone i saw in a dream.
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Though I am the only one that sees her
Appear late into the night.
She always appears to me
In an eternally lasting heavenly light.

I know she is my soul mate
And though I will never tell
She has the keys to my heart
And she looks into it like it’s a well..

She always makes the blood run to my face.
And she shall eternally
Make my heart pound and race.

My eternal love shall never end.
Through thick and through thin
My love I shall always defend.
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Though I do not know her name
She makes my heart a lion that is hard to tame.

She gives me such a bloodlust
To meet her I know I must.

In a dream of haze
She stood out to me.
Like a beacon of light
Far out at sea.

Her voice was shy
Ever so shy.
It sounded like a majestic bird in the sky.

It was a dream but felt ever so real,
O the way it made me feel.
To get her eternal love I would even steal.

With hair as black as night
And skin so creamy white.
With her eyes so deep blue
I almost said, “I love you.�

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