Your beauty...

[Underground_Network]

I know your beauty is unreal
You make my heart just skip a beat
I love you more than anything
You make me want to plunge into
The darkness deeper than before…

I love you with all of my heart….
In fact I don’t know where to start
I need you, I feed off your emotion
I need to make you feel happy

It’s my destiny I feel it
I need your beauty
To seal this deal
Once and for all and…

I love you forever always
I love you, I always will
I swear upon the entity
That is me that I love you so…

Your beauty is unreal
It makes me feel
As if I’m moving
When I’m standing still…

I love you forever always
I love you, I always will
I swear upon the entity
That is me that I love you so…

Your beauty makes me smile
And I can’t think when
I am around you…
Because I am amazed by your prettiness…

You knock me off my feet
You are amazing and you make me
Want to fly away
Into a place, I’ve never been before…

I want to hold your hand
I want to be your man
I want to be with you
Forever and ever and ever…

I love you forever always
I love you, I always will
I swear upon the entity
That is me that I love you so…

[Zephyr]

Absolutely beautiful = )
You have a gift for writing.

[Underground_Network]

How do you think a girl would react if I gave this to her?

[Zephyr]

Well, it would depend on the girl,
But personally, I would probably melt if a guy gave this too me = )

[Underground_Network]

Grr.. I just don't know... I actually made this song for a particular girl, but I just don't know... I'm afraid if anything the song will just freak her out... :/

[Zephyr]

Well if you guys know eachother,
I say it shouldn't.
If I was her, I'd take it as a compliment.

If you don't want her to freak out,
Just hand it to her and ask what she thinks of it.
If she likes it, tell her that it was written for her.
If she doesn't like it,
Then she doesn't like it.

[0=]

Nice, but the you're in the first line should be your.

[Underground_Network]

Ah, yeah, the downside of me not revising these is common grammatical errors.. Lucky for me firefox catches most of my spelling mistakes [though they're usually just typos, since I'm nowhere near a terrible speller]... And Steph, I'll keep that in mind, but this girl is a girl I know, but not really a girl that I'm friends with or know super well... I was thinking of possibly even leaving it to her anonymously... But at this moment I don't know yet...