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The Batman
May 17th, 2008, 01:52 PM
Stuck between choices
Torn in two
Should i go with her
Or go back to you
You've done me wrong
Treated me sad
Broke my heart
And made me feel so bad
But you gave me a chance
when everyone else said no
You told me to stay
When everyone else said go
But she's never done me wrong
Or broken my heart
She loves me always
In light and in dark
I'm so confused
Don't know what to do
I do love her
But I still love you

The Batman
May 25th, 2008, 07:14 PM
OMG Thomas you are amazing I did not know you could write poetry you are god.

Maverick
May 25th, 2008, 07:16 PM
Now thats just sad to comment yourself. :P

I do like the rhyme. I'm always a fan of poems simple to understand. :P

iJack
May 25th, 2008, 07:17 PM
OMG Thomas you are amazing I did not know you could write poetry you are god.

I hate it when people do that

I like the poem!

The Batman
May 25th, 2008, 07:22 PM
If you can't praise yourself then who can you praise.

Maverick
May 25th, 2008, 07:30 PM
Other people? Heh.

The Batman
May 25th, 2008, 07:39 PM
What other people "There can be only ONE,". Anyways I've been writing poetry for 3 three years now and I have a few others.