Crush

[PubertyInfoWanted]

Let me spell out Crush 4 u
C means the crush that i have 4 u
R is for how red my heart is for you
U is how unique u r and how
you can be so wonderful
S is how I keep my feelings a
secret from u
and H is for how Humble and faithful
I'll be 2 u
These are the feelings that i keep from u
I cant say that I love u
but i would love to be wit u
You'll be my one and only
there aint no 2 and 3 wit u
in the future i wont press 2 sleep
wit u if u say no ill just agree
wit u everytime you start 2 walk
away from me I start to miss u
the man u wit is way 2 pitiful
he treat u like
Sh1t and ur way 2 valuable
I know Im only 14 but i gotta do
wat i gotta do Im on my grown
man and aint no man gonna show
you the things that I can I am
as patient as i can be in class
When u walk by me i start to
day dream and i know things
aint as it may seem I front
like u just a friend but wat im
thinkin is me and you could make a
great team.But these is just thoughts
of mine if u feel the same
way get at me 1 time til then
ur just a friend and a thought in my
Mind.
:wub:

[Sage]

It's a nice poem but it'd be better if you changed the short-hand into full words. 'u' becomes 'you, 'r' becomes 'are', and such. Otherwise good.

[Sugaree]

Wow very cool :thumbsup:

Great job!

[PubertyInfoWanted]

thank you all really appreciate it

[Nihilus]

Wow nice poem!!!!