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~Dangerous MInd~
September 13th, 2005, 10:41 PM
your hand reaches up to the camera set above your right eye stieffling you, perceiving you, watching your movements. A palm, an angry fed up palm blacks out everything, the view, the torment of the eye peering over you, controlling you and lacing every second with fear. You dont care anymore, you dont feel anymore, theres no picture just a silence in the darkness while people wonder... what happened? where are you? you are on the floor in a room where it's cold and damp and there's no way out and the floor is harder than marble. white marble, the color of your mind which is blank and trapped in an asylum with no color.

Anonymous
September 14th, 2005, 03:04 PM
That was beautiful, as always, Sarah. Im glad your back. :D

Cinimonwaffalz3
September 17th, 2005, 09:34 AM
that was amazing! i like it!

Peanut Butter
September 28th, 2005, 08:51 PM
it was awesome i applaud you *clapping hands*

Elokyn
September 28th, 2005, 08:54 PM
wow that's awesome sarah, I love it